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First Six Word Story Results

February 13th, 2010
 

As was announced in the forums and on Twitter, WritAnon held its first “Six Word Story” contest.  There is no physical or financial reward, but we select our favorite three six word stories for special mention here.

Watch for the next Six Word Story announcement coming out tomorrow!  Next week’s will have a theme.

And now, the results of the contest:

First place:Treacherously loquacious- he’d said too much.”  — Guo Xiang

We selected this as first in part because Xiang’er used the word “loquacious” correctly in a sentence, and also because we loved the phrase “treacherously loquacious”.  There’s also a big hint at a larger story…something had been revealed unintentionally, in part because the character didn’t know when to keep his mouth shut.  Well done!

Second Place:Coffee mug, six dollars. Poison free.” — Mikal

In the spirit of full disclosure, this was my submission.  Yes, it might be considered unfair, but there were only three submissions this week…and since there is no real prize here, I didn’t feel too bad about including myself.

However, this works on several levels.  Is the poison included at no cost?  Has the mug been certified poison-free?  Is the sender trying to help knock someone off, or get rid of evidence?  Why is poison mentioned at all?  In any case, while not as good as Guo Xiang’s entry, this still was good enough to earn a second place.

Third place: “The bullet ended his life quickly.”  — ZackyV14

The advantage of this story is that it definitely had an ending.  There’s also a beginning–just starting at when the bullet was fired (or in midair).  A reader can’t help but wonder where it came from, and why it was fired at the character.  Perhaps we’ll never know, since the main character is already gone.

This concludes this week’s round-up.  Thanks to everyone who participated!

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The Monster Under the Bed — ZackyV14’s response

February 12th, 2010
 

For years I waited in the darkness, being nothing but a victim to frightened children and annoyed parents. I’m nothing to worry about, I don’t exist. How could they jump to such bold conclusion. I remember when those parents used to fear us, when they used to cry to those who cared for them. Decade after decade I succeeded in frightening those to young to know any better and keeping those who did no better awake. The darkness was my greatest ally, and only wreaked havoc with in it.

Tonight was different for use though. We had grown sick of being mocked and sick of being spoken against without consequence. What did we do that night? We proved our existance. I waited all through the night until I saw those small, familiar feet toddle into the room followed closely by the larger ones. They exchanged their goodnights and hugged before the parent left and shut the lights off, giving me control of the room.

I waited to hear to soft snoring the child before I extended my arms, silently pulling my gangly body from the space beneath the bed. I wrapped my hands around the child, the coldness of my flesh quickly bringing him awake.
He couldn’t scream, the shock of seeing my distorted face to much for the young boy. I wrenched the boy from the covers and held in the air, several feet above the ground. In the darkness of his room, I consumed the boy; as did millions of others around the Human World. That night we escaped our realm from under the bed and proved our form of life. What would those parents do? What does a world think when every child sleeping on a bed disappears in the same night?

Perhaps next time you speak to your children, you won’t dismiss us so quickly as lies.

 

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