Comments on: Lost (an experiment in character development) http://blog.writanon.com/2009/08/17/lost-an-experiment-in-character-development/ Blog of the Bartender Sun, 05 Feb 2012 23:56:38 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: William Marmont http://blog.writanon.com/2009/08/17/lost-an-experiment-in-character-development/comment-page-1/#comment-56 William Marmont Tue, 25 Aug 2009 09:04:27 +0000 http://blog.writanon.com/?p=198#comment-56 This is very believable. I like it. It was hard to believe it was a fragment, except for the abrupt ending of "I don't want to appear weak." You should definently continue this, if you want to. This is very believable. I like it. It was hard to believe it was a fragment, except for the abrupt ending of “I don’t want to appear weak.”

You should definently continue this, if you want to.

]]> By: Effective Character Development « Writers Anonymous http://blog.writanon.com/2009/08/17/lost-an-experiment-in-character-development/comment-page-1/#comment-53 Effective Character Development « Writers Anonymous Mon, 24 Aug 2009 10:29:53 +0000 http://blog.writanon.com/?p=198#comment-53 [...] posting Lost, I received several questions asking how I was able to bring the character to life so [...] [...] posting Lost, I received several questions asking how I was able to bring the character to life so [...]

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